托福写作如何完美收官?详解2大结尾万能模板

托福考试中，想要得到高分是每个托福考生的愿望，那么如何才能让自己的托福写作得到高分?那么，在以下内容中就为大家介绍托福写作如何完美收官详解2大结尾万能模板。希望能为大家的托福备考带来帮助。

　托福写作如何完美收官?详解2大结尾万能模板

万能结尾一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，你就可以拿高分了，比如下面的例子：

Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise frompoliteness and respect for others.

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we canfind that…

万能结尾二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve l

这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.

Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

对于托福写作部分的结尾处，是比较让人心悠的环节，因为通常情况下，考生在考试时间接近尾声的时候，由于紧张的心态会严重影响到写作内容，可能更严重时会给考生造成大脑空白，导致作文写不完。但无论如何大家一定要把控好时间，重视结尾的写作，不要给考官留下虎头蛇尾的印象。

　　托福独立写作结尾模板及解析　

托福写作结尾一： 重申立场+反问句

例如：托福写作题目：Some people like to live in a small town, while others like to live in a large city. If you had a choice, where would you like to live?

我方立场：I would like to live in a big city.

托福独立写作结尾： Although a growing number of serenity-seekers regard the smaller community as their dream homeland, I still opt for the metropolis for its convenience and dynamic life. When it comes to living, how can one possibly deny that the purpose of life is to explore new things that small towns fail to offer?

解析：这个结尾采用了重申立场+反问句的写法，很大气。“尽管越来越多寻找宁静的都市人把小城市视作自己的梦想家园，但我仍然觉得大城市更胜一筹。当谈到生活，谁能否认生活的目的不就是探索新的东西吗?而这一切都是小城市无法给与 的。“ 反问句写的是反方立场的弱点，这其实在内容和Plan B是相同的，只不过用的反问句来加强语气。

托福写作结尾二：重申立场+反方观点的弱点

例如：托福写作题目：When people go on a trip, some like to go with a friend while others like to go alone. Which do you prefer?

我方立场： I would rather to travel with a friend.

托福独立写作结尾： Taking all of the factors above into account, being accompanied by some close friends tends to be a better option when it comes to having a trip. This even makes more sense if one is fully aware of the possible dangers of travelling on one’s own, that is, being helpless when emergencies occur and having no one to share the excitement.

解析：这个结尾采用了重申立场+反方观点的弱点。“考虑到以上所列出的论点，我们可得知当说到旅游时有人陪伴是一个更好的选择。这点更说得通，如果一个人清楚地明白独自旅行潜藏的坏处，即遇到紧急情况的无助感以及无人分享旅途的兴奋感。“语言上的主语替换尤为灵活，I would rather to trav

托福写作结尾三：重申立场+补充

例如：托福写作题目： There are people who learn about life by listening to their friends’ or families’ advice. On the other hand, there are those that learn from personal experience. Which one do you prefer?

我方立场：It is better to learn from personal experience.

托福独立写作结尾：In a nutshell, it is quite common for us to seek advice from our buddies or family when faced with life dilemma, but in most cases, more benefits can be available if we pick up some lessons by our own experience. After all, it is our action rather than other people’s words that determine what kind of people we want to be. (62 words)

解析：这个结尾采用的是Plan A，重申立场使用了比较法，这也是托福结尾最常用的一种方法，因为大多数写作题目都涉及两者对比。“总而言之，当面临生活困境时人们往往会向朋友和家人求助，但在大多数情况下，如果我们自己尝试一些事情，往往会学到更多的经验。“语言转换上，使用了换主语和换词的方法，我方立场It is better to learn from personal experience，主语是It, 但在结尾换成了benefits, 整个句子即变成了more benefits can be available if we pick up some lessons by our own experience.结尾第二句话，补充了我方立场的合理性，进行了升华。”毕竟，决定我们将来成为什么样的人的关键点并非是他人的言语而是我们自己的行为。“

el with a friend.转换为了Being accompanied by some close friends tends to be a better option when it comes to having a trip.

　　托福写作的思路问题可以这么解决

要去解决托福写作中思路匮乏以及例子缺乏细节的问题，我们不妨先来看一道托福独立写作题目以及一道类似的雅思写作题目。

先来看道托福写作题目：

Agree or disagree: technology has made our lives more complicated rather than simpler.

题干旨在让考生们去描述科技对于我们生活的好坏，但并没有个科技任何的描述。

再来看到雅思写作题目：

We have been living in the nuclear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine.

To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?

题干旨在考察同学们对于核科技的好坏分析，但题干却描述了核科技在现代生活中具体一个方面的作用，也就是政府能够用来研制出核武器。

大家来看下这两道题目的区别，同时考察同学们对于一个具有争议性的观点。托福写作题目的出题角度会更加的抽象。而雅思写作题目会给出一个细节的描述，这就可给各位考生们一个启发去分析这个题干。

我想从托福写作和雅思写作题目的对比中来和各位同学们谈谈写作中例子细节的展开。

回到一开始的那道独立写作题目：Agree or disagree: technology has made our lives more complicated rather than simpler.

题干让我们去描述科技使得我们的生活简洁还是复杂。我们也应该从生活中去切入，思考下我们现在生活中有哪些便利和不便是由科技所带来的。

例如生活在北方的同学就能到想到雾霾，那我们在深究下雾霾所产生的原因和雾霾所带来的后果。

现逻辑就就会很清晰了：

原因：工厂的污染物排放，大量汽车的尾气排放等引起的。

结果：产生了雾霾

后果：出行戴口罩;容易患呼吸道疾病;能见度降低，交通事故率增加;肺癌死亡人数增加

这种逻辑思考方式，魔君在课上称为：线性思考方式，也就是找一件事情发生的原因，以及分析这件事情所产生的后果。

对应线性的逻辑思考方式，能够对应魔君课上常讲的一例法论证。

当然还存在另外一思考方式，魔君在课上称为：平行思考方式，也就是去分析你所想到的例子平行对等物，例如雾霾我们划分到空气污染的一个上级名词，但包括在空气污染里的下一级名词还有哪些呢?有：全球变暖;臭氧层空洞导致的紫外线过多;酸性排放物过多导致的酸雨等。

对于平行的逻辑思考方式，能够对应魔君课上常讲的多例法论证。

这里就能够解答很多同学问魔君的一个问题，我如何能像您一样随意的就能够打出600+的文章呢。那么答案很明显了，就是结合使用线性和平行两种思考方式去展开自己的文章。

　　托福写作范文：应该读小说还是非小说

托福写作真题题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

托福写作范文：

Fiction is as valuable as nonfiction in many ways. It can educate us about real things. In addition, its helps us foster our creativity and explore our emotions. Thus, I advocate reading fiction as well as nonfiction.

In the first place, fiction can provide us with information about real things and invited a deeper understanding of them. Nonfiction serves as facts on file whereas novels provide us with facts and their implications for real people. Reading novels by Hemingway, for example, helps us understand the consequences of way in the 20th century.

In the second place, fiction helps us develop our imagination and creativity. When we read stories, we try to visualize what the characters and settings look like. We even try to picture what it feels like to live a character’s life. This kind of empathy is conductive to developing imagination and creativity. For example, by reading novels about people who have scaled high mountains, I gain a vicarious experience and give full play to my imagination. Interestingly, imagination and creativity developed this way has enhanced my understanding of many real life situations, for example, when I have difficulties to surmount.

Finally, fiction helps us understand and express our emotions. Novels are a mirror of our lives, and in particular our emotions. By reading them, we develop a sharper understanding of our real feelings and learn to explore or even vent them in new ways. Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austin’s best novel, has taught me more about the way our emotions work than the events and facts talked about in many psychology textbooks. For example, Darcy, one of the major characters in the novel, shows both pride and prejudice. The way that he maintains and manages both helps me better understand how emotions work.

It is important to learn facts, but it is also important to develop imagination and explore emotions. In order to achieve this deepen our understanding of ourselves and of the world around us, we need to read fiction as well as nonfiction.