首考托福拿下写作满分的大牛告诉你，你离满分只有四个误区的距离

今天小编为大家分享一篇关于托福写作四大误区的“排雷”经验帖，这篇文章的作者在第一次考托福时就顺利拿下了托福写作满分的战绩，TA认为想要拿到托福写作满分，在备考过程中有四点常见误区需要注意，我们一起来膜拜学习一下吧!

首考托福拿下写作满分的大牛告诉你，你离满分只有四个误区的距离

误区一：拿高分一定要语言高大上

许多同学认为，自己拿不了写作高分，是因为自己的用词不够华丽，句式太简单。但是其实，我首考时，用的都是最基本的托福水准词语，没有什么大词。但关键是，我的词语一直都在以同义词的方式变换着，句型虽然也只使用了几种，但也是交叉变换着用。变化很重要，这能体现考生对于语言的灵活运用程度，给考官一种新颖的感觉。

托福写作中可以灵活运用的九种句型：

主谓宾

主系表

There be

被动

强调句型A

Eg: It is the picture of __hat impresses me deeply.

强调句型B

Eg: The picture of __does have a deep impression in my memory.

倒装

Eg: Were you stand beside the sea, you would remember the happy moment in the past. (倒装+虚拟)

虚拟

平行

Eg：《双城记》给了我们best example:

It was the best of times,

It was the worst of times.....

We had everything before us, we had nothing before us......

误区二：套用模板一定拿不了高分

有的同学认为，拿满分的同学一定没有用模板。但是，模板是自己对于“未知性”很大的托福写作考试的最好的准备，哪怕遇到很难的题目，也能自信满满地“噼里啪啦”敲出一两行模板句，然后写作的灵感就来了。如果事先没有任何写作模板的准备，等到考试时脑子一热，就啥也写不出来了，只能面红耳赤地坐在那儿听考场中别人热热闹闹的键盘敲打声。

综合写作中一定要用模板，一定要用模板，一定要用模板!在时间比较紧的综合写作时，用模板可以节约时间，为自己增加信心和底气。

独立写作中，开头、中间段的开头结尾句、结尾都可以用模板，这样自己的句型都尽在自己的掌控内，将更多的时间放在作文内容的构思上。用模板时，不要照搬网上或者机构老师给的模板，自己学聪明一点，DIY拼凑、用同义词、同义句的形式修改一下，就是自己的unique one啦!

附上一份综合写作模板：

The lecture is mainly discussing_____, _______and _______ by____, challenging what are stated in the reading passage that _____, _______and _______.

First of all, the speaker thinks that ______. In contrast, the reading passage believes that ______. So, the lecture totally disagrees with the view made in the reading.

Second, the speaker discusses______, contradicting what is stated in the reading that ______.

Finally, the speaker raises the issue that ______. This point disagrees that ______ demonstrated in the reading.

误区三：字数一定要多才能拿高分

许多机构的老师都会信誓旦旦地跟学生说：“字数写不到500字，还想拿高分?”但是我写作考满分那次，综合写作写了273个字，独立写作也只写了368个字，真心不能算是字数多的。我有个同学自己参加考试，洋洋洒洒争分夺秒，考场独立写作打了七百多个字，可最后只有23分，可见字数多不见得就能拿高分。

我的经验是字数可以不多，但是一定要说理具体、条理清晰，句子之间要有逻辑，思维不要太跳跃。考官一天批改那么多作文，当然喜欢读上去很顺畅、连贯的作文啦!

误区四：托福写作的准备只需要想思路

许多同学觉得，只要捧着托福写作机经想想思路，就能在考场上写作得心应手。但是，我认为，托福写作一定要上机练习!想思路和上机亲自写作完全是不一样的感觉!想思路的结果就是，考场上有了思路可却无从下手，对句型的掌握程度、词汇句子的使用和表达完全不熟练，甚至连打字都磕磕绊绊，时时打错，这种不熟练会使自己更加紧张、慌张，从而影响自己的发挥。

而如果平时就经常上机练习，考试时就会感到非常心态平和，打字都特别顺畅，写起句子来很熟练，表达清晰，完全就是平时训练的感觉。

托福独立写作范文：21世纪将有什么重大变化

The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.

Now that we are in a new millennium, we can assume there will be changes in the world. I predict that the changes will be in the areas of information dissemination, global alliances, and family structure.

In the past decades, the computer was responsible for changing the way information was organized. Now, the computer plus the Internet is changing the way information is spread. Information will now be universally available to anyone with a computer. You will not have to go to libraries to do research; you will not have to travel to visit scholars; you will not have to go to a bookstore to buy a book. You can do all of this from your home on the computer.

In the past decades, the nations of the world aligned themselves with the United States, the former Soviet Union, or with one another in a loose alliance. In the future these alliances will be more fluid. Some countries will align politically with one country, but economically with another. Some countries will share technology and other information, but will not trade together. Some countries, which have long been enemies, will align militarily for regional security.

The family structure will not be based on a mother/father/child pattern. Single parent families will be more common and often the child will not be a biological child of the single parent, but will be adopted. Other family structures like domestic partnerships will become more accepted.

Whatever the changes may be, whether in the way we receive information, the way nations align with one another, or the way family units are defined, you can be sure that there will be more change. Change is a constant.

托福独立写作范文：好邻居的素质

Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

Neighbours are the people who live near us, and their behaviour influence our daily life. Good neighbours can make us feel comfortable and give us many help, and everyone will benefit from a good relationship among neighbours. In my point of view, these are three conspicuous aspects of the qualities of a good neighbours.

One of the most important characteristic of good neighbours is that they have a good living habit and are friendly to others. A person with bad habit will affect your daily life. For example, children are most likely to be influnced by bad neighbors and carry on bad habits. On the other hand, being friendly is also an important nature of good neighbors. If neighbours are unfriendly, they are hard to approach and difficult to get along with.

Another important aspect of of good neighbors is that they should be willing to help others. In our daily life, emergency situations may happen, and we may encounter difficulties which can not be resolved by ourselves. At this time, the quickest help we can get is probably from our neighbors.

To some degree, neighbours are as important as relatives to us, because they could provide the immediat help. In the same way, a neighbour who likes to help others will get help in return. Help each others can form a friendly and harmonious relationship among the neighbours.

All in all, a good neighbour is someone who have a good living habit, is friendly and is willing to help others. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that a good relationship among neighbours need the maintenance from us.

托福独立写作范文：一家新餐厅在你家附近建立

It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

I can see both advantages and disadvantages to having a new restaurant built in our neighborhood. I'm worried about traffic and how it will affect our neighborhood. However, I think that it will benefit local businesses and increase appreciation for our neighborhood. Overall, I think it is a good idea.

Traffic congestion is always a concern when you build something new. Our streets are narrow, with parking on both sides. More cars traveling through the neighborhood could cause a lot of congestion. Traffic means parking problems, too. Our neighborhood has very few garages attached to the houses. Most of us depend on finding a space to park on the street. If the new restaurant is built, we'll be competing for those spaces with the restaurant's patrons. Plus, if the restaurant offers valet parking, it'll be even worse. Valet parkers work in teams to grab every possible space available on the street.

I'm also concerned about the type of patrons this new restaurant will bring into our neighborhood. A family restaurant wouldn't be a problem. However, if it's going have a bar and dancing, then there could be problems. The restaurant would stay open later, and people leaving the restaurant might be drunk. Who wouldn't worry about rowdy customers staggering around our neighborhood in the early morning hours, looking for their cars?

I have to admit, though, there are advantages to a new restaurant. Our neighborhood could certainly use the jobs the restaurant would provide. Not only that, the money neighborhood residents would earn there would likely be spent at other neighborhood businesses. This would give a boost to those businesses and make our neighborhood more prosperous.

A new restaurant would also attract a lot of people to our neighborhood. They could see what a nice area this is to live. That might attract new residents to the neighborhood. That would be a good thing, because we've been losing residents to the suburbs the last couple of years.

There are a lot of details to consider, but all in all, I support the idea of this new restaurant in our neighborhood.