怎样提高初中一年级的作文水平
今天小编带来了适合初一写作水平的满分范文，多看几遍这些范文，记在心里，再也不用担心你的英语写作啦。
英语范文1
根据下面提示写一篇60词左右的短文。
Tom 正和他的一个朋友Jim 谈论他所在的学校。Tom 很不喜欢这所学校，原因是这所学校的规章制度太多。
要点：(1)保持安静(2)不准吃零食(3)不准乱扔垃圾(4)不准打闹(5)按时上课(6)做好课前准备
【优秀满分范文】
Tom is talking about his school with his friend Jim. Tom tells Jim he doesn’t like this school very much, because there are too many school rules for us.
1. Keep quiet in the classroom ,please.
2. Don’t eat snacks in the classroom ,or it will make our classroom dirty.
3. Don’t throw around.
4. Don’t fight and chase after each other in the classroom. Of course, you can’t make any noise.
5. Please arrive at the class on time. Don’t be late, or our teachers will be unhappy.
6. Get ready before the class. Don’t look for anything after the class begins.
If we break any one of them, we will be punished.
英语范文2
【写作话题】本单元以人们正在进行的活动话题，用现在进行时描述自己或他人正在进行的活动。
【写作题目】假设你叫魏梅，根据下面提示给你的朋友Helen 写一张明信片，介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么，不少于60词。
提示： 现在是星期三晚上八点，你的爷爷和爸爸在下象棋，奶奶和妈妈在看电视，姐姐在房间看书，哥哥在玩电脑游戏。你们很开心。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Helen ,
How are you? It’s eight o’clock in the evening now. What are you doing now?
People in my family are doing different things. My brother is playing computer games. You see, he likes playing games very much. My grandpa and my father are playing chess. My grandma and my mother are watching TV and my sister is reading a book in her room. We are having a good time.
See you soon.
英语范文3
本单元以人们正在进行的活动话题，用现在进行时描述自己或他人正在进行的活动。
写作题目：假设你叫魏梅，根据下面提示给你的朋友Helen 写一张明信片，介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么，不少于60词。
提示： 现在是星期三晚上八点，你的爷爷和爸爸在下象棋，奶奶和妈妈在看电视，姐姐在房间看书，哥哥在玩电脑游戏。你们很开心。
优秀满分范文：
Dear Helen ,
How are you? It’s eight o’clock in the evening now. What are you doing now?
People in my family are doing different things. My brother is playing computer games. You see, he likes playing games very much. My grandpa and my father are playing chess. My grandma and my mother are watching TV and my sister is reading a book in her room. We are having a good time.
See you soon.
Love,
Wei Mei
