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写好“绝对词”类托福写作题目,从拒绝承认周杰伦最厉害开始

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很多同学在遇到绝对词类型的托福写作题目的时候不知道从何下笔,下面小编给大家带来写好“绝对词”类托福独立写作题目 ,从拒绝承认周杰伦最厉害开始。

写好“绝对词”类托福写作题目,从拒绝承认周杰伦最厉害开始

  什么是“绝对词”类文章呢?

大家记住,凡是有the best或者the most+adj.的题目,即最高级的题目,我们就把它叫做“绝对词”类。

首先我们来看下这个题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

The best way to know a country is by watching their movies.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

那么对于这个题目,很多同学见到了都会欣喜若狂,说好简单我看懂了,就去写文章了。然而,却不知这道题目是有陷阱的。

通常,我们看到题目的一般思路就是想两方面:好处和弊端。

例如这个题目的好处:举两个例子就是

1.在轻松的环境中了解到了外国;

2..这个途径比较节省金钱;

然后是通过看电影了解外国不好的两点:

1. 不能切身去感受

2. 了解到的内容比较片面

那么其实这样去构思的话是比较局限的,就是在围绕着看电影这一件事去写,在考试时间很有限的条件下,很难去实现。

那么怎样去高效地快速分析这个题目呢?

我们要做的第一步就是先确定观点。

也就是说,我们先要确定我们对这种说法是反对还是认同。

这里老师推荐反对观点。为什么呢?

我们说下原因:因为要证明它是最好的方式很难去论证的,要一一去跟其他方式pk。

这里很重要!大家要注意!

下面来看看,持反对观点,我们应该怎么去答这道题:

There is no denying that watching the movies is a good way to know a country.

不可否认,看电影是了解一个国家的好方法。

However, it is not the best method. Firstly, reading magazines and newspapers is much better a way to know a country.

然而,这不是最好的方法。首先,阅读杂志和报纸是更好的了解一个国家方式。

In addition, traveling in a country is a much better way to know a country.

此外,去一个国家旅游也是一个了解一个国家更好的方式。

这三句话是主体段的中心句,通过这三句话,我们看到,可以找两个比看电影更好的方式,去了解一个国家。这里说的是reading magazines and newspapers(阅读杂志和报纸)与traveling(旅游)。然后,根据以上两点各写一段用来阐述,就ok了。

那么通过这样的方式,我们就把视野开阔了许多,不只是局限在看电影这一点了。就很容易去构思了。也达到了我们高效考试的目的。

这么一来,我们的写作思路就更加清晰了。

我们现在主要说明以下三点就够了:

看电影不是最好的方式。

看杂志是更好的方式。

旅游是最好的方式

  写好“绝对词”类托福独立写作题目 从拒绝承认周杰伦最厉害开始

在托福独立写作部分有一类题型我们称为“绝对词”类文章,顾名思义就是题目中带有must, the best, only等过于绝对化表达,如果举个更容易理解的例子就是:你是否同意以下观点?周杰伦是最厉害的华语唱作男歌手。此类题型堪称托福独立写作中的小婊砸,原因不仅仅在于问题的设定容易引起不同观点间的“撕逼”,更在于这类文章的行文其实暗藏陷阱,稍有不慎就会造成文章逻辑自相矛盾无法自圆其说。

比如这里这个接地气的例子,假如我们选择同意观点,那我们整篇文章的展开无非按照以下两个套路来:

套路一.

首段:同意题目,我们Jay Chou就是华语乐坛第一牛逼的唱作男歌手。

中一:周杰伦唱歌最好听不接受反驳。

中二:周杰伦作曲最厉害不接受反驳。

尾段:再次同意题目,我们Jay Chou就是华语乐坛第一牛逼的唱作男歌手。

这个套路的最大问题在于,文章证明了周杰伦唱歌作曲都很厉害,但是没有任何横向纵向的比较,无法凸显出他在所有华语唱作男歌手中是“最厉害”的。

Woops……Game Over!

套路二.

首段:同意题目,我们Jay Chou真的真的是最牛逼的华语唱作男歌手!

中一:周杰伦唱歌作曲最厉害不接受反驳。

中二:周杰伦完爆其他所有华语男歌手。因为在我看来,同期出道其他男歌手都不咋滴,后起之秀们又都很弱。

尾段:再次同意题目。我们Jay Chou真的真的是最牛逼的华语唱作男歌手!

这个套路稍微好了一些,至少有了通过对比比较来凸显出“最厉害”的意识,总算没有跑题。然而,这样的套路中间段会异常难写,因为你需要有力论证其他所有华语唱作男歌手都没他厉害,王力宏陶喆华晨宇薛之谦……请一个个拉出来仔细对比慢慢PK——且不谈你是否真能自圆其说,有限的作文字数和考试时间你确定够用?

其实,对于此类“绝对词”托福独立写作题型,我们最稳妥也最好写的方式是选择在最开始就不同意题目所给观点——反对绝对化表达其实很好操作,不管题目所给观点看上去如何言之凿凿,你只需要找到一个反例就可以把它轻松推翻。比如我们可以按照下面这个思路来:

省心套路

首段:反对题目,周杰伦并不是最厉害的华语唱作男歌手。

中一:周杰伦是一位优秀的华语唱作男歌手,有着顶级的天赋和努力,创作和演唱了很多优质华语音乐作品。

中二:但是周杰伦并不是最厉害的,因为很多其他华语唱作男歌手也同样优秀,比如同时期同样创作高产似杂交水稻、现场唱功稳到让人送膝盖的林俊杰,更不要提其他堪称艺术家的前辈们和如雨后春笋般不断出现的乐坛新秀们。

尾段:所以我反对题目。周杰伦虽然创作和演唱都厉害,但绝不是最厉害的华语唱作男歌手。

托福独立写作部分类似的“绝对词”题目还有很多,比如以下这些:

Money is the most important aspect in a job.

To teach students the importance of a subject outside school is the best way to increase students’ interest in the subject.

Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

大家可以借鉴此类“省心”套路,在日常备考过程中做好练习与反思,不断提升自己的托福写作水平,实现能力和分数的同步提升。

  托福写作开头好句子写法11则

采用不同的句子开头是使句子多样化的手段之一。我们造句及写作的时候不应该总是用 “subject-verb-object” 的结构顺序,而应该尽量用不同的方式展开一个句子。不同的句子开头既可以美化句子,同时也能使句子与句子之间自然过度,衔接自然,以免过于依赖过渡词。在TWE 考试中主考官对句子结构的多样化也非常的重视,看看常见的句子开头的方法!

句子的开头可以采用以下的任何一种方式:

1. 用副词开头,常见的情形有:

(1) 副词修饰全句

Luckily, he didn’t know my phone number; otherwise, he would bother me.

Incredibly, Helena got straight A in her school report this semester.

Interestingly, cats and dogs can hardly get along well in a house.

修饰全句常用的副词有:

obviously undoubtedly

apparently fortunately

clearly unfortunately

incredibly luckily

unluckily surprisingly

frighteningly

这些副词大多数表示说话人对全句的看法,在意思上相等与 “It is ... 形容词that ...” 。 e.g:

Obviously, he is nervous about the test. =It is obvious that he is nervous about the test.

Unfortunately, he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud.

(2) 强调副词

Hurriedly, the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction.

Dangerously, the drunkard sped down the street.

Slowly and gently, snowflakes were drifting down from the sky.

(3) 副词表示某一地域或某一领域

Geographically, Canada is the biggest country in the world.

Financially, she is independent, but emotionally she is dependent.

2. 用插入语开头,表示说话人的态度,或使句子的意思更加准确:

Strangely enough, Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.

Generally speaking, winter in Vancouver is gloomy.

类似的插入语有:

no wonder no doubt

in other words in my opinion

in conclusion in fact

as a matter of fact

3. 用形容词、并列形容词或形容词短语开头,修饰句子的主语,表示主语的特征或状态:

Frantic, the young mother rushed out the door with the baby in her arms.

Tasty and crisp, potato chip are a favorite snack for both children and adults.

Happy at his good marks at school, the little boy skipped on his way home.

Desperate and hopeless, the poor man committed suicide.

4. 用分词、分词短语开头:

(a) 修饰句子主语,表示主语所处的状态或主语同时进行的另一个较谓语动词次要的动作:

Scared, the girl moved timidly and cautiously into the dark room.( 状态)

Chased by my dear pet cat, the mouse dashed into a small hole.( 状态 )

Spoiled by his parents, the naughty boy always insists on things he wants.( 状态)

Puffing and hugging, he finished his run.( 另一动作)

Looking at herself in the mirror, she fingered her silk scarf on her shoulder.( 另一动作)

(b) 修饰谓语动词,表示原因、时间等

Lying down on the couch, he felt much relaxed.( 时间)

Feeling bored, she turned on the TV and switched from channel to channel.( 原因)

Wanting to find out the business hour, she called the store.( 原因)

Having completed the form, he mailed it out immediately.( 时间)

5. 用介词短语开头,表示句子谓语动词发生的时间、地点、方式、原因、条件等:

On seeing him approach, the girl immediately turned her face to a shop window

pretending to look at something there.( 时间)

Around the corner, a crowd gathered.( 地点)

Unlike his father, Peter touches neither cigarettes nor alcohol.( 方式)

Due to the limit of Seats, he was not accepted.( 原因)

In case of fire, use the stairways.( 条件)

6. 动词不定式开头,强调谓语动词动作的目的:

To celebrate the arrival of the Millennium, we held a grand party in the hotel.

To show my trust on him, I deposited $ 10,000 into his bank account.

7. 用独立分词短语开头,使句子有正式的味道:

Birds singing in the tree, another routine day starts.

Sea gulls flying over the water, the old fisherman flung his fishing meat into the open sea.

A dog following them, the police searched every suspect.

8. 用过渡句开头,表示此句与上下句的关系:

Consequently, I slowed down to avoid a fine ticket.

In fact, she was a kindhearted woman.

9. 用同位语开头,表示主句位于动词发生的时间、地点、原因、方式、条件等:

A signing officer of the bank, Jane signs her name hundreds of times each day at work.

A TV addict, Jim watches TV movies one after another every evening until after midnight.

10. 用副词从句开头,表示主句谓语动词发生的时间、地点、原因、方式、条件等:

When you are in need of help, give me a call.

Wherever you go, I follow.

Since your children love hamburgers and fries, we might as well eat in MacDonald.

As if it were summer, everybody wear shorts and a T-shirt.

In case that you get lost, call me at this number.

11. 用名词从句开头,作整句的主语:

Whether you take the position or not makes great difference to me.

Why I am unhappy is something I can’t explain.

What they should do about the hole in the roof is their most pressing problem.

  托福写作高分必背范文:Collectibles

Collectibles have been a part of almost every culture since ancient times. Whereas some objects have been collected for their usefulness, others have been selected for their aesthetic beauty alone. In the United States, the kinds of collectibles currently popular range from traditional objects such as stamps, coins, rare books, and art to more recent items of interest like dolls, bottles, baseball cards, and comic books.

Interest in collectibles has increased enormously during the past decade, in part because some collectibles have demonstrated their value as investments. Especially during cycles of high inflation, investors try to purchase tangibles that will at least retain their current market values. In general, the most traditional collectibles will be sought because they have preserved their value over the years, there is an organized auction market for them, and they are most easily sold in the event that cash is needed. Some examples of the most stable collectibles are old masters, Chinese ceramics, stamps, coins, rare books, antique jewelry, silver, porcelain, art by well-known artists, autographs, and period furniture. Other items of more recent interest include old photograph records, old magazines, post cards, baseball cards, art glass, dolls, classic cars, old bottles, and comic books. These relatively new kinds of collectibles may actually appreciate faster as short-term investments, but may not hold their value as long-term investments. Once a collectible has had its initial play, it appreciates at a fairly steady rate, supported by an increasing number of enthusiastic collectors competing for the limited supply of collectibles that become increasingly more difficult to locate.

写好“绝对词”类托福写作题目 ,从拒绝承认周杰伦最厉害开始