初次拜访桂林 My First Visit to Guilin

Last week, my parents went to Guilin to visit their friends, so I have the chance to go to Guilin with them. I felt so excited, I had heard about Guilin many times, people told me that the scenery there was very beautiful. When I arrive there, I could feel the air was different from the city I lived, the air there was so fresh. The second day, my parents went to see the scenery, we rent a boat, enjoying the magnificent mountains and clean water. At that moment, I felt I was one member of the Guilin people. People claim that Guilin’s mountain and water rank the first in the world, now I believe. I want to go to visit Guilin again.
上周，我的父母去桂林拜访朋友，因此我有机会和他们一起去桂林。我感到很兴奋，我已经是多次听到桂林的事，人们告诉我们那里的山和水是很美丽的。当我到了桂林，我可以感受得到那里的空气和我住的城市是很不同的，那里的空气很清新。第二天，我的父母去看风景，我们租了一条船，享受着壮丽的群山和清澈的水。在那个时刻，我觉得自己就是一个桂林人。人们都说桂林的山水甲天下，现在我相信了。我想要再次拜访桂林。