不良商业广告的危害The harm of fasle commercial advertisements

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My view on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1. 现在有些不良的商业广告

2. 这些广告的副作用和危害性

3. 我对这些广告的态度

My view on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements

一些广告的负面影响之我见

范文：

Nowadays there are a lot of false advertisements in society. They have caused many harms to society. Generally, their harms can be listed as follows.

现在，社会上有很多虚假广告。他们给社会造成了许多危害。总的来说，他们的危害正如以下所列出的。

First, they exaggerate the functions of the goods they advertise and mislead consumers. Second , some advertisements contain obscene contents and bring about spiritual pollution. Third, they seriously damage the credit of businesses because the shops which sell those goods will be distrusted and even considered the conspirators of those advertisers by consumers.

首先,他们利用夸大了商品的功能，误导消费者。第二,一些广告包含淫秽内容给人们带来精神污染。第三,他们严重损害了企业的信誉，因为通过消费者商店出售的这些货物将不被信任，甚至被认为是那些广告商的同谋者。

Personally, I am usually vigilant against any advertisements and so I have never been taken in. However, some people are credulous and are easily taken in. Therefore, in my opinion, effective measures must be taken to ban false advertisements and protect consumers' interests. First, all the advertisements must be strictly censored by the authorities concerned before they are published. Besides, severe punishment must be inflicted on those who publish illegal advertisements.

就我个人而言,我通常对所有广告保持警惕，所以我从没被欺骗。然而,有些人是轻信的，很容易被欺骗。因此，在我看来，必须采取有效措施来禁止虚假广告和保护消费者的利益。首先，所有的广告在发布前必须经过有关机关严格审查。此外，那些发布违法广告的必须遭受严厉的惩罚。

In conclusion, false advertisements must be eliminated in our society.

总之,虚假广告必须在我们的社会中消灭。